its not bad
try to make it more interesting with background music and more pictures. the text was also hard to read. very helpful though!
entertaining a little
it entertained me for a few minutes.
it's not that bad for your first!
try to make it a little bit slower, add animation for when you shoot it, and it will be good to go!
thanks for the advice
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